Chapter 1: Loss and Battle?Note: Ne

Chapter 1: Loss and Battle?




Note: New Story! Gonna be about Fei and Kinako... hope yuu guys like it, and here it is (:


Fei and everyone else came back all depressed of their lost of Coach Endou-kun. "I cant believe i couldnt help him..." Tenma said looking down while walking to the hang out, Fei walked to Tenma "Tenma-kun.. dont be so down i promise will save him ok?" Fei simled Tenma looked at him and smiled then nodded.

They all got to the hang out and walked inside the room, and saw everyone here. Tenma got happy to see everyone here, "Minna~! h-how are you guys?" Tenma said looking around. "Were feeling better i guess... Captain." said hayami said rubbing his head. "Thats good!..." Shinsuke said cheering, "Why are you all happy? did something happen to us?" Daichi said confused.

Fei then was up to everyone, "You all were hit by darkness and you all started to hate soccer and never wanted to play it, but now we fixed time... and everyone is-" Fei was cut off by a squeal from a girl, "Omg Captain... Minna~! your all BACK." She said, everyone turned to her.

"Who are you?" Tenma asked, she giggled "Thats funny captain..." Tenma looked more confused as ever. Fei whispered to Clark Wonderbot "Could we have did something, for her to exist in this timeline?" Fei said clark looked at the girl who was still talking to Tenma, "I think so..." He said to Fei and Fei nodded. Kinako and Tenma were still talking.

"So do you wanna be a manager?" Aoi said, She turned facing Aoi. "No no... Aoi-chan, im one of the soccer players, here." She moves her hair and shows the #10 on her shirt. Everyone gasped "H-how did you get that?" Shinsuke asked looking at Tsurugi who had the same number,

"Thats easy... me and Tsurugi had a soccer battle to be the striker and i won, so i took the shirt." She said spinning around giggling. She then stopped, "But... i feel like its now wrong, maybe i shouldnt have took it from him. Ill take it off Captain" She smiled

She lifted da shirt up half way but the 3 girls stopped her and making Tenma and Shinsuke turn around fast blushing. "Uh... Maybe you should do it later ok... um..." Tenma said, then turning around.

She looked at him kinda sad "Captain... wats wrong? are you not feeling out?" She said looking at him and getting closer.

"I-im fine... um, just wats your n-name?" She gasped and then giggled "Ohhh captain, thats soo mean... but you did ask i guess i could tell you." She smiled, he sighed "My name is Nanobana Kinako." she said spinning around and stopped putting one of her hands on her head and leaning to one side to do her pose. "Well... hi Nanobana-san." Tenma smiled at her, leaving her confused.

Then they heard a big boom from outside, and they all ran outside. "... Oh noo, they followed us!" Shindou said getting mad, Everyone was in shock while the other half have know idea wats going on, Fei walked forward. "Wat do you guys want!" Fei said, they captain smiled.

He stepped forward up to Fei too, "We want a soccer match... a new one, because of the stupid coach of ways." Tenma yelled back "Hes not stupid and youll pay for that! were is he!..." Tenma said making half of his teammates gasp. "T-Tenma wat happened?" Asked Hikaru, but Tenma didnt answer he was to mad to.

"We will Challenge you!" Tenma said in anger, making his hands into fists. The captain smirked "Ok..." she pulls out a button looking thing and throws it into the air and it turns into a soccer ball. "Move mode!" The captain said, and they moved to a soccer field but in a sandy place.

"Lets see if you can win..." She laughed, while Tenma looking really anger. "Tenma-kun, are you sure we should-" Fei stopped seeing how upset and mad Tenma is, for losing his Coach. "Im with you Tenma-kun." Fei said, and everyone agreed to play soccer. Tenma turned facing his teammates and friends.

"Thank you minna~! Thank you sooo MUCH!..." Tenma said shedding tears and then facing the other Team. "Let play soccer MINNA~~!" Tenma said, running to the field.


I KNOW ITS SHORT... AND I KNOW IT MIGHT SUCK, BECAUSE ITS DA FIRST CHAPTER! SOOOO KNOW MEAN REVIEW(: okkk... well den, until next time biii Minna~!


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Chapter 1: the Loss and Battle?Note: New Story! Gonna be about Fei and Kinako ... hope u u guys like it, and here it is (:Fei and everyone else came back all depressed prices of their lost of Coach Endou-kun. "I cant believe i couldnt help him..." Tenma said looking down while walking to the hang out, Fei walked to Tenma Tenma-kun. ". dont be so down i promise will save him ok? " Fei simled Tenma looked at him and smiled then nodded.They all got to the hang out and walked inside the room, and saw everyone here. Tenma got happy to see everyone here, "Minna ~! h-how are you guys? " Tenma said looking around. "Were feeling better i guess. Captain. "said hayami said rubbing his head. "Thats good! ..." Shinsuke said cheering, "Why are you all happy? did something happen to us? " Daichi said confused.Fei then was up to everyone, "You all were hit by darkness and you all started to hate soccer and never wanted to play it, but now we fixed time ... and everyone is-" Fei was cut off by a squeal from a girl, "Omg Captain ... Minna ~! your all BACK. " She said, everyone turned to her."Who are you?" Tenma asked, she giggled "Thats funny captain..." Tenma looked more confused as ever. Fei whispered to Clark Wonderbot "Could we have did something, for her to exist in this timeline?" Fei said clark looked at the girl, who was still talking to Tenma, "I think so..." He said to Fei and Fei nodded. Kinako and Tenma were still talking."So do you want to be a manager?" AOI said, She turned facing Aoi. "No no ... AOI-chan, im one of the soccer players, here. " She moves her hair and shows the # 10 on her shirt. Everyone gasped, "H-how did you get that?" Shinsuke asked looking at Tsurugi who had the same number,"Thats easy ... me and Tsurugi had a soccer battle to be the striker and i won, so i took the shirt." She said spinning around giggling. She then stopped, "But ... i feel like its now wrong, maybe i shouldnt have took it from him. Ill take it off Captain "She smiledShe lifted the skin shirt up half way but the three girls stopped her and making Tenma and Shinsuke turn around fast blushing. "Uh ... Maybe you should do it later ok ... um... " Tenma said, then turning around.She looked at him kinda sad "Captain ... wats wrong? are you not feeling out? " She said looking at him and getting closer."I-im fine ... um, just wats your n-name?" She gasped and then giggled "Ohhh captain, thats soo mean ... but you did ask i guess i could tell you." She smiled, he sighed, "My name is Nanobana Kinako." she said spinning around and stopped putting one of her hands on her head and leaning to one side to do her pose. "Well ... hi Nanobana-san." Tenma smiled at her, leaving her confused.Then they heard a big boom from outside, and they all ran outside. "... Oh noo, they followed us! " Shindou said getting mad, Everyone was in shock while the other half have know idea wats going on, Fei walked forward. "Wat do you guys want!" Fei said, they captain smiled.He stepped forward up to Fei too, "We want a soccer match... a new one, because of the stupid coach of ways." Tenma yelled back "Hes not stupid and youll pay for that! were is he!..." Tenma said making half of his teammates gasp. "T-Tenma wat happened?" Asked Hikaru, but Tenma didnt answer he was to mad to."We will Challenge you!" Tenma said in anger, making his hands into fists. The captain smirked "Ok..." she pulls out a button looking thing and throws it into the air and it turns into a soccer ball. "Move mode!" The captain said, and they moved to a soccer field but in a sandy place."Lets see if you can win..." She laughed, while Tenma looking really anger. "Tenma-kun, are you sure we should-" Fei stopped seeing how upset and mad Tenma is, for losing his Coach. "Im with you Tenma-kun." Fei said, and everyone agreed to play soccer. Tenma turned facing his teammates and friends."Thank you minna~! Thank you sooo MUCH!..." Tenma said shedding tears and then facing the other Team. "Let play soccer MINNA~~!" Tenma said, running to the field.I KNOW ITS SHORT... AND I KNOW IT MIGHT SUCK, BECAUSE ITS DA FIRST CHAPTER! SOOOO KNOW MEAN REVIEW(: okkk... well den, until next time biii Minna~! Ch 1 of 3 Next » Review Jump:Chapter 1Chapter 2Chapter 3