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Good afternoon everyone. My name is Thanh. Today, I am going to be talking about my interested place Nha Trang where I would like to take you if you love to go to visit Vietnam. Firstly, I will start by introducing about Nha Trang after that I will show you how to get in Nha Trang, and then many place need to be visited in Nha Trang.
Frist of all, I would like to tell you introduce about Nha Trang, it is a small sized city in Viet Nam, located within Khanh Hoa province where is widely known thanks to its beautiful beaches, which is about 450km from HCMC ( need to put full stop here to end of sentence) the most famous seaside resort-town because It is not only the beautiful bay, but also the scuba diving center of Viet Nam, with its islands and white sand beaches, made for a perfect bathing spot, and there are excellent for a stunning vacation.
I would like to show you the second point, how to get in Nha Trang. In fact, you can go there by airplane but you must pay a high price by using taxi when you move from Cam Ranh airport to Nha Trang city. In contrast, a better choice is to take the airport bus from Cam Ranh to Nha Trang because of its cheap cost. Moreover, You also get in Nha Trang by train, of course, Nha Trang is a stop on the main railway-line connecting Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh City. Furthermore, you also get in Nha Trang by car, but you must spend 9 hours getting there. Well, I have told you about how to get in Nha Trang.
Let me show you the last point, there are many wonderful places to visit in Nha Trang. If you want to dive into the sea and see fish, Nha Trang is a great place to do it. Furthermore, you can go to Vinpearl park, there are many game for visitors. Especially, there are cable trains in Vinpearl park which you can see around Nha Trang beach when you get into them, which due to the fact that it is wonderful. In the evening, it will be fantastic if you go to around Nha Trang by bicycle or go to seashore. What is more, the seafood here is great and cheap. Therefore, I have talked about famous place in Nha Trang.
Well, that covers anything I want to say. Thank you for listening. Does anyone have any questions?

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Good afternoon everyone. My name is Thanh. Today, I am going to be talking about my place in Nha Trang where interested I would like to take you if you love to go to visit Vietnam. Firstly, I will start by introducing about Nha Trang after mà I will show you how to get in Nha Trang, and then many need to be visited place in Nha Trang.
Frist of all, I would like to tell you about Nha Trang introduce, it is a small sized city in Viet Nam, Khanh Hoa province located trong where is widely known thanks to the its beautiful beaches, about 450km from HCMC mà (need to put a full stop here to end of sentence) The Most famous seaside resort-town vì It is not only the beautiful bay, but am also the scuba diving center of Viet Nam, with the its white sand beaches and islands, made ​​for a perfect bathing spot, and there are excellent for a stunning vacation.
I would like to show you the second point, how to get in Nha Trang. In fact, you can go there by airplane but you pay a high price phải by using taxi khi you move from Cam Ranh airport to Nha Trang city. In contrast, a better choice is to take the airport bus from Nha Trang to Cam Ranh vì the its cheap cost. Moreover, cũng You get in Nha Trang by train, of course, Nha Trang is a stop on the main railway line connecting Ha Noi-and Ho Chi Minh City. Furthermore, you get cũng in Nha Trang by car, but cần spend 9 hours getting there. Well, I have Told you about how to get in Nha Trang.
Let me show you the last point, there are many wonderful places to visit in Nha Trang. If you want to dive Into the sea and see fish, Nha Trang is a great place to do it. Furthermore, you can go to Vinpearl park, there are many games for visitors. Especially, there are trains in Vinpearl cable park you can see mà around Nha Trang beach When You Get Into add mà Due to the fact That it is wonderful. In the evening, it Will Be fantastic if you go to Nha Trang around by bicycle or go to the seashore. What is more, the seafood here is great and cheap. Therefore, I have Talked about famous place in Nha Trang.
Well, That covers anything I want to say. Thank you for listening. Does anyone have any QUESTIONS?