Hi :)) Can I comment in English?Thi

Hi :)) Can I comment in English?
This sounds great :))) Very creative (good dream too huh ;) ). However, I think you should rewrite this somehow to make it sounds more interesting. Like maybe give a hint, or a rhetorical question for the audience to ponder on? That would definitely make them look forward to the next chapter.
Otherwise, good luck with the Wattys!!! I'm in it too - super excited :))) I'll definitely support your story ;)))

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HI:)) Can I comment in English?This sounds great:))) Very creative (good dream too huh;)). However, I think you should rewrite this to make it somehow sounds more interesting. Like maybe give a hint, or a rhetorical question for the audience to ponder upon? That would definitely make them look forward to the next chapter.Otherwise, good luck with the Wattys!!! I'm in it too-super excited:))) I'll definitely support your story;)))

Kết quả (Anh) 2:

Hi :)) Can I comment in English?
This sounds great :))) Very creative (good dream too huh;)). Tuy nhiên, I think you shouldnt this rewrite to make it somehow sounds more interesting. Like maybe give a hint, or a rhetorical question for the audience to Ponder on? That would definitely look forward to the added make next chapter.
Thì, good luck with the Wattys !!! I'm in it too - super excited :))) I'll definitely support của story;)))