I took the photo in the summer of 2

I took the photo in the summer of 2009 when we were on holiday with my friends
in Punta Cana.
We were on a beach called “Paradise Coast”. This beach is famous because there
are a lot of corals and tropical fishes.
In this photo we can see our friends snorkelling and they were very happy because
they were seeing colors’ colour (two problems: 1. “colour” is working as an adjective, so
you don’t need the possessive “s” here / 2. If you say “favourite”, you should keep with the
British spelling throughout the composition) fishes. While fishes, while we were
sunbathing and drinking (better: having) a coktail (cocktail).
We love this photo because it reminds us of a lovely holiday. We hope to come back
there the next summer.
We have this photo in the friend’s album an album where we keep all our friends’
photos.
(109 words)

Kết quả (Anh) 1:

I took the photo in the summer of 2009 when we were on holiday with my friends in Punta Cana.We were on a beach called "Paradise Coast". This beach is famous because there are a lot of corals and tropical fishes.In this photo we can see our friends snorkelling and they were very happy because they were seeing colors ' colour (two problems: 1. the "colour" is working as an adjective, so you don't need the possessive "s" here/2. If you say "favourite", you should keep with the British spelling throughout the composition) fishes. While fishes, while we were sunbathing and drinking (better: having) a coktail (cocktail).We love this photo because it reminds us of a lovely holiday. We hope to come back There the next summer.We have this photo in the friend's album an album where we keep all our friends ' photos.(109 words)

Kết quả (Anh) 2:

I took the photo in the summer of 2009 we were on holiday khi with my friends
in Punta Cana.
We were on a beach gọi "Paradise Coast". This beach is famous vì
are a lot of corals and tropical fishes.
In this photo WE CAN snorkelling and see our friends were very happy vì chúng
They were seeing colors' color (two problems: 1. The "color" is working as an adjective , than
you do not need the possessive "s" here / 2. If you say "favorite", you shouldnt keep with the
British spelling throughout the composition) fishes. While fishes, while we were
sunbathing and drinking (better: having) a cocktail (cocktail).
We love this photo reminds us of vì it a lovely holiday. We hope to come back
next summer there the.
We have this in the friend's photo album, an album Where We keep all our friends'
photos.
(109 words)