My family has five people: My paren

My family has five people: My parents, my elder sister and my younger brothẹr and me. My father is sixty-five years old and my mother is fìfty- fỉve years old. Both of them retired five years ago. My father used to work as a doctor in 103 hospital. He is not only a good doctor but also a wonderful father. My mother used to be a teacher. Every day, she cooks, reads a newspaper about health. In their free time; my parents often visit their friends. They have the same interests such as reading poems and going to the cinema. I feel proud of my parents. My elder sister is twenty- three years old. She works as a chemist in Thanh Sen Company. She is still single though she is a beautiful girl. She and I both like listening to music, going shopping and ..sleeping! My younger brothẹr is eighteen years old. He is a student of Phan Đinh Phung high school. Although we are grown-ups, we still occasionally fight each other. In spite of that; my family is very happy.

Some tiny items have been corrected in bold letters as I thought they should be,

Kết quả (Anh) 1:

My family has five people: My parents, my elder sister and my younger brothẹr and me. My father is sixty-five years old and my mother is fìfty-fỉve years old. Both of them retired five years ago. My father used to work as a doctor in 103 hospital. He is not only a good doctor but also a wonderful father. My mother used to be a teacher. Every day, she cooks, reads a newspaper about health. In their free time; my parents often visit their friends. They have the same interests such as reading poems and going to the cinema. I feel proud of my parents. My elder sister is twenty-three years old. She works as a chemist in The Lotus Company. She is still single, though she is a beautiful girl. She and I both like listening to music, going shopping and. ..sleeping! My younger brothẹr is eighteen years old. He is a student of Phan Dinh Phung high school. Although we are grown-ups, we still occasionally fight each other. In spite of that; my family is very happy.Some tiny items have been corrected in bold letters as I thought they should be,

Kết quả (Anh) 2:

My family has five people ': My parents, my elder sister and my younger brother and me. My father is sixty-five years old and my mother is fifty- Five years old. Both of retired five years ago added. My father USED to work as a doctor in hospital 103. He is not only a good doctor but am also a wonderful father. My mother USED to be a teacher. Every day, SHE cooks, reads a newspaper about health. Trong free time; Their parents often Do visit my friends. They have the same Interests như reading poems and going to the cinema. I feel proud of my parents. My elder sister is twenty- three years old. She works as a chemist in Thanh Sen Company. She is still single though She is a beautiful girl. She cả and I like listening to music, going shopping and ..sleeping! My younger brother is eighteen years old. He is a student of Phan Dinh Phung high school. Although grown-ups We Are, We still occasionally fight each other. In spite of truth; My family is very happy. Some tiny items in bold letters Corrected past tense as I Thought They shouldnt be,