To: William HoFrom: Rebecca ChurchS

To: William Ho
From: Rebecca Church
Subject: Genoa Optical Convention
Date: April 8
Dear Will,
I am now attaching my presentation for the Genoa Optical Convention next month. As discussed, I’d be grateful if you could take a look at it and let me know your thoughts. In particular, I wonder if you could help me make it more concise, as I am worried that it is currently a little long. Any advice would be hugely appreciated. Also, please can you double check that the company logo on page 1 is in the correct format – as you know, I am not good with design!
If you don’t mind, could we meet tomorrow or the day after to discuss? I’d like to hear your feedback in person. Afternoons anytime after two are good for me, so please let me know when would suit you best.
Best,
Becca

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To: William H.From: Rebecca ChurchSubject: Genoa Optical ConventionDate: April 8Dear Will,I am now attaching my presentation for the Genoa Optical Convention next month. As discussed, I'd be grateful if you could take a look at it and let me know your thoughts. In particular, I wonder if you could help me make it more concise, as I am worried that it is currently a little long. Any advice would be hugely appreciated. Also, please can you double check that the company logo on page 1 is in the correct format-as you know, I am not good with design!If you don't mind, could we meet tomorrow or the day after to discuss? I'd like to hear your feedback in person. Anytime after two afternoons are good for me, so please let me know when would suit you best.Best,Becca

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To: William Ho
From: Rebecca Church
Subject: Optical Genoa Convention
Date: April 8
Dear Will,
I am now my Attaching Optical presentation for the Genoa Convention next month. As Discussed, I'd be grateful if you could take a look at it and let me know Your thoughts. In Particular, I wonder if you could help me make it more Concise, as I am worried how few đang a little dragon. Any advice would be hugely appreciated. Also, please can you double check your company logo on page là 1 is in the correct format - as you know, I am not good with design!
If you do not mind, could tomorrow or the day We Meet to Discuss sau? I'd like to hear your feedback in person. Afternoons Jimmy anytime after two are good for me, please let me know khi than would suit you best.
Best,
Becca